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Okay I rewrote this story as I said I would..
WARNING.. This is sick & I love it.. NOT suitable for children under 120yrs of Age!!
Tara beat her lover so badly...
She beat Jain until she lie in the hallway of their appartment. She had no idea why she did it, but she couldn't help it. She loved to do it.. Jain was so easily controled & was only beautiful when she was hurt. Her blonde hair matted with blood, Her skin bruised. Tara was a beautiful girl though, Her hair was Long, pitch black & soft.. Her eyes a most stunning green.. But she was a horrible sadistic B----.. & she had just thought of something.. Something horrible..& she reached or her gun.
She brought her arm back & smacked Jain across the face with the handle, HARD, breaking her nose. The bones jutted from her face.. The wound open & bleeding.. Then she crawled on top of her.. She bit her neck as hard as she could, & pulled her long, blonde hair back.. The barely concious girl choked but could not scream.. Blood dripped from the wound..
Tara clutched the gun, And kissing her lover on the lips, tasting her blood, she forced the gun inside her lover.. Feeling Jain writhe in pain beneath her.. And after a minute.. She pulled the trigger.. & blew her lovers skull apart.. Tara was possessed by something terrible.. & feeling the rush of adrenaline through her.. She bit the bones jutting out of Jain's broken face, & with her teeth she tore the flesh from them..& swallowed it.. She then reached her fingers into what was left of Jains skull.. & tore her open. Watching Jain's eyes slide down her brain, She grabbed one, & bit it off.. & swallowed it too. & with blood all over her.. Tara licked her fingers.. & Shot herself in the eye..
D.Lynn.. |
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frozenimage
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Love it, very beautifully grotesque
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sephir_PREV
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Heh heh.. Thanks hun.. I am a sick B----..
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tigerblack
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muwahahaha...nice one...very good! sounds like a ruined relationship...with a messy ending...
My cat tells me to burn things... |
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sephir_PREV
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Thanks I have more Horrible stories..
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frozenimage wrote: Love it, very beautifully grotesque
wow that sumpthin special rite there thats down rite gorgeouse
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switch
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That was ----ing awesome!!!!!!!!!! Loved it so much that i wish i had extra hands so i can give it four thumbs up!!!!!!!
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| sorry I forgot al my info on here so i just created a ew account.. but thanks for the compliments more to come here soon! |
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laureate
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Sweet, loved it. One ----ing talented, ----ed-up writer. Omg it makes me wanna write again lol.
Schweet as sex!!!
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.alright write back anytime
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