writen by a friend....plz comment

[stormyskye]

haven't seen my blood in a while
kinda missed the color...kinda missed the taste
didn't really missed the sting
nobody knows but
last night blood filled my mouth
tried to spit it out
but everytime i did
again the fist hit my face
as he walked away
i layed on the floor
unable breath unable to move
unable to cry
as i layed there i felt pain
going through my whole body
i layed there till it was real late at night
i got up and got into bed
feeling so numb
i couldnt sleep
i found my knife
put it under my pillow
just in case
i layed in my bed
starring at the moon and the stars
waiting till i could run into your arms
i started shaking unable to stop
wondering when im gonna leave and never come back
i wanna cry
but i cant cry no more
my body cant produce anymore tears
finally the sun comes up
i pack my things and i leave
im 5 miles aways from home
cant believe i walked that much
theres a car behind me
it pulls over....its him
i try to run but he catches me
he takes me back home
and acts like everythings okay
but once were inside the housee
he hit me again and again and again
blood is falling everywhere
it coming from my mouth
my nose...my eyes
im losing so much blood
my vision starts to go blury
all i can hear is my heart beating fast
my painful cries
everything goes black
i pass out
i wake up drenched in sweat
turns out it was just a dream




*this was a poem written by my best friend
and would really appreciate any comments on
how good was the poem*